Gender inequality mostly is something that takes place in jobs. Women on average earn less than men in virtually every single occupation. In 2015, female full time workers mad only 79 cent for every dollar men made each hour.
Knowing this makes me feel guilty because that means that I could be making more than my spouse in a couple of years and that doesn't feel very fair . I would like to raise awareness towards the problem in my community.
This could be an issue because of the past idea that men are more dominate than women. The jobs that put women in these positions are jobs that are "a man's job",and the idea that women should stay in there place at home with the kids or cleaning the house created this problem
This problem can be solved by spreading awareness or going to the places that mostly cause this problem and have rallies or protests to let the public know what is going on;to make a point.
1.It was clear that your claim was about gender inequality in the workplace.
ReplyDelete2.I see that your support was that"Women on average earn less than men, You could Gavin more on your support by it was good.
3.In your post I didn't feel that your post had a flow to it, it felt all mushed together.
4.There was no quotes used in your blog post.
5.You had no spelling errors in your post so good job.
6.I didn't feel that your arguments weren't strong enough to backup your claim.
7.You had some good points in your blog, good job
8.You could of made your blog post longer and work on organization a little better to.
1. Your Claim was clear
ReplyDelete2. Your support was on and off
3. It felt a little rushed
4. Quotes?
5. No spelling errors
6. Weak argument
7. Great effort
8. Make it not just an opinion